托福写作范文 [托福写作真题解析和范文：应由学生或其他老师评价老师教学表现？]

时间：2018-07-19 19:31:11　来源：天一资源网本文已影响人

题目

Schools always collect information about teachers' teaching performance and give rewards to those teachers who perform well. Which way do you think is more useful: evaluate teachers' performance by students, or evaluate teachers' performance by other teachers?

题目分析

这是一个很贴生活实际的问题。让学生对老师的评价，还是其他老师的评价作为给老师奖金的依据？还记得小编上初中的时候给我们的数学老师的某一栏打了个4/5，不小心被老师看到了。然后…一整天都慌慌地。

思路分析

在小编看来，这个问题的争论的中心点是在于如何做最公平。虽然说到底，这两种评分的标准各有千秋。让学生填呢，老师可以天天讲笑话，学生学不了东西，但喜欢老师。让老师填呢，老师可以各种凶神恶煞，但让学生成绩不错，并获得其他老师的称赞。虽说这是两种极端情况，但也不失讨论的价值。

范文

To evaluate teachers based on students’ feedback, or evaluate teachers based on other teachers’ feedback? Although most schools today adopt a mixed system which includes evaluations of both, they tend to focus more on either the students or the teachers. Personally, I would preferan evaluation system which leans more toward the opinions of students because I believe it will be in the best interests of everyone in general, including students and teachers alike.

To start off, teachers are supposed to respond to students, not their peers nor their superiors. For example, a good teacher should provide lessons and assign homework based on the student’s ability. In this case, students can learn new materials without feeling too much frustration. However, this process may conflict with the teaching plan that schools assign which every other teacher uses. In this case, the teacher will have to choose to satisfy students or appeal to his or her peers and the school’s authority. Therefore, it is important to design a process to incentivize teachers to respond to students rather than others.

Secondly, evaluation through students can save a lot of time and effort for other teachers. For example, In Chinese schools, each teacher typically has to deal with over fifty students each class. Therefore, it will be a nuisance to pay detailed attention toward all other teachers on how they teach students, and this is under the assumption that they want to evaluate their peers in a fair and just manner. Since students have already spent so much time with their educators, they can easily come to conclusions on how good or bad their teachers are. In this sense, students can be more inclined to make fair evaluations compared to other teachers.

Last but not least, student evaluations are safer from controversies on the rewarding compared to teachers’ evaluations. Typically, there are only a handful of teachers within a school. Since there are only few people making evaluations, every teacher is more vulnerable toward biased opinions. If schools heavily base their rewarding systems on teachers’evaluations, there will be controversies all over the place. In addition, this may lead to a dangerous trend that teachers will no longer respond to the wellbeing of the students at all, but focusing on how to make BFFs with other teachers and superiors, which will further increase the chances of have controversies. Because of this, focusing too much on teachers’ evaluations will induce a negative cycle which makes everyone unhappy.

All in all, It is necessary for schools to adopt both students’ and teachers’ evaluations in order to be fair for judging teachers’ ability. However,it will be unwise to focus on the latter becauseit puts unnecessary burden on the teachers while leading them toward being unresponsive toward the students.

范文解析

我的观点是：学生评价比老师评价更为重要。主体段第一段我表明了学生评价能让老师更为学生着想，从而能更好地根据学生情况制定课程和作业。第二段我则说明了让老师评价会给老师们带来不必要的麻烦，因为老师本身就很累了。第三段我举例表明了为什么过多侧重于老师凭价会加重争议，因为人人都会有偏见。最后，我表示虽然学生评价与老师评价都很重要，但学校更应该偏重于学生对老师的评价。